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👤 Author: by myp123 2018-01-03 08:43:35
"Back view" is a popular essay written by Mr. Zhu Ziqing. His essay is not long and written very plain, but his works are touching and deep touching.
Works of the narrative is that many years ago his father sent him to Pukou train station north of the scene is not long, only a thousand words. A total of six natural paragraphs, the first two natural paragraphs mainly for the appearance of backs to stand up and pave the way, account of the back of the emergence of a specific background: repeated misfortunes, family dismal.
The third, fourth, five main paragraphs of the natural writing process, of which the fifth section of the detailed description, focus wrote his father's deportation. The last paragraph wrote his son's deep thoughts on his father, quoted his father's letter, deepen the theme. Looking at the full text, the article is very plain, but always reveals a touching emotion: deep feelings between father and son, his father's meticulous care of his son and his son's father's memories and infinite gratitude. The essay is the materialization of the author's inspiration, the product of the author's feelings overflowing, thinking smart.
The author is very grateful to his father's love, emotion in the middle, the prosecution of the pen, the externalization of this is full of emotional articles. The article is filled with love and affection, deep feelings of father and son overflowing with the paper, however, abstract and ready-made words such as "care", "love" and "gratitude" do not make any sense in the article, nor are there any gorgeous rhetoric. The article is simply decorated with no whitewash ordinary words, with plain, true to impress readers. The article is written in the father's back, that is, without description and modification, with simple language, the scene was faithfully written down to give readers the opportunity to witness. I saw him wearing a black cloth cap, wearing a black cloth jacket, dark cloth cotton robe, hobbled to the railroad side, slowly lean forward, not a big deal. But he crossed the railway, to climb the platform over there, it is not easy. He climbed above with both hands and his feet up again; his obese body leaning to the left, showing the way it worked. Then I saw his back, my tears flowed quickly. I quickly wiped tears, afraid he saw, but also afraid of others see. When I looked at him again, he had held the vermilion orange and looked back. When crossing the railway, he first scattered the oranges on the ground, slowly crawling down, and then picked up the oranges. When he arrived here, I hurriedly mixed him.

The author uses plain text to describe the scene when his father went to buy me oranges. He wrote how his father went, how he went to work, how he climbed the platform and climbed up and down. These are all descriptions, Lead, to keep the true color, to the real simplicity, thin to come, the people, things, feelings, feelings, the original state of the original appearance in the reader's front, people feel empathy. "Back" to love, moved countless readers. I think this is not only because the author wrote the real emotion in plain language, but also in the article implies a kind of "faint sorrow", and this kind of sadness is the influence of the world to the author. The author's mood is sad, this sadness also deepens the reader's understanding of father and son love. The article begins with the tone of "sadness," "the death of ancestor, the death of his father," and "the situation in the home is bleak." This is undoubtedly a heavy blow to the author, when the author's family situation is sad, the author's mood is sad.
It is in this context, the father demeanor for the author, but then the elderly father to find a job, where the author saw his father's back. The author describes this back, not only integrated into the deep gratitude to his father, but also melt into a kind of bitterness and sad mood, it is another mood to deepen the feelings of the reader to his son, causing Readers' sympathy and sympathy. With plain language to describe, the worldly feeling hit and true feelings, this is the "back" success

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